Reading maketh a full man . . . . . Speaking maketh a ready man . . . . . Writing maketh an exact man.

~~Sir Francis Bacon

Saturday, October 26, 2013

Due Friday, November 1, 2013 (FI#9 & Letter)

We will meet @ 10:00 on my class conference line. Dial in at 10:00am. Do NOT
go to St. Simon & Jude this Friday. 
No SS&J ~~~>

Essay Assignment:
Write a letter to a loved one, preferably to someone you care about greatly.
Choose someone who would especially appreciate a letter from you.
Suggestions in my classes include:
1) "My brother in Afghanistan"
2) "My Godparent in Ohio"
3) "My Grandmother"

• KWO first! Jot down reminders of what you want to share.
• Include RD and Checklist and KWO with finished essay/letter (PLEASE STAPLE THESE TOGETHER)
• Minimum 2 paragraphs
Include at least one of each dress-up and each opener (#2, #3, and #6)  in each paragraph. Start a new paragraph when you switch topics. Make sure each paragraph has at least 6 to 7 sentences minimum.

I will let you decide if you want to mail these letters after the essays (letters) are graded. I really hope you will save a copy without the bolding, underlining, etc., so that you can mail to your loved one. Better yet, hand-write the one you are actually going to send.

Here is an example of what KWOs could include:

Weather
    Sweaters here Sunday
     Rain on Mon
     Roses happy 7Bloomed!
     Dogs loving it
     Fido outside lots
TY 4 sweater (still use!)
       liked zigzag embroidery
       People compliment
       Never want 2 outgrow
Funny thing class
     Teacher crazy!
      Acted like train
      Little Engine book
      Writing getting better
       A's on papers
       Share w/ U soon
Sister's school picture
       Silly smile
       Blinked eyes
       Teacher laughed
       Re-taking next week
Football game w/ neighbors
       Parents against kids
       P' better than expected!
       I caught pass
       Sister made touchdown
        ids won
Thanksgiving plans
         Can U come?
          Miss you
          @ least Skype
Homily @ Mass good 1!
         Priest told joke
         Gospel from Luke
         I understood & liked
         Had 2 explain 2 brother
         Included fav Bible verse
         Reading next Sun.'s B4 Mass
         Easier to follow
Learning to kayak
         Fell in twice
         Water not deep
         Dad took picture
         Will post on FB
         Practiced again yesterday
         River pretty & clam
         Heron, Fish, Dragonflies

Monday, October 21, 2013

Due Friday, October 25, 2013 (FI#8 & Ind Qs)

Answer the question you chose or obtained by a trade . . . . .

Homework:

1) Essay Details:
One paragraph minimum

Include all Dress-ups, and Openers #2, #3, and #6 in EACH paragraph

Be sure to "indicate" properly

Vocabulary words - properly used and indicated = extra credit

Alliteration (3 in a row) - properly used and indicated = extra credit

Include your KWO & a rough draft & checklist

No banned words or contractions

Do not use dialogue (or, use at your own risk)

2) Fix It #8

3) Vocabulary Words 



Saturday, October 12, 2013

Due Friday, October 18, 2013 (FI#7 & Add 3 Openers)



1) Essay Assignment:
Add 3 openers to your Nursery Rhyme Essay . . . .
a #2, #3, and #6 
• Make any changes that we talked about in class . . . no banned words, indicate only what is required, add vocab if you want to.
• Remember to INDICATE
PROPERLY
• Remember that all required DRESS-UPs and these three OPENERS should be in each paragraph 
#2 -- Prepositional opener (AKA: prep opener)
#3 -- ly opener (AKA: adverbial opener)
#6 -- vss 
2) NO KWO for this assignment 
3) NO Rough Draft for this assignment
4) YES  CHECKLIST -- Please include a checklist
5) YES Fix It #7
6) YES Vocabulary Words

Saturday, October 5, 2013

Due Friday, October 11, 2013 (FI#6 & Nursery Rhyme)

Assignment Details: 
Staple these first four things together:
1) Nursery Rhyme Essay
2) KWO
3) Rough Draft
4) Checklist

5) Fix It #6
6) Vocabulary Words


HEAD'S UP! Vocabulary Test on Friday, October 11, 2013

I have sent an email to every family with 4 attachments.
1) Tom Sawyer Fix Its (a pdf file)
Parents, this will allow you to stay on top of upcoming FIX ITs and vocab. Move ahead or review, as you deem appropriate. THIS week’s FIX IT is “week 6.” I just like to refer to it as #6 because the “weeks” do not correspond to our co-op weeks. 
2) Formatting I advise you to print this and place it in the appropriate place in your student’s 3-ring binder.
3) Indicators with examples I advise you to print this and place it in the appropriate place in your student’s 3-ring binder.
4) Checklist Print multiple copies. Students are now required to submit one with each essay.

REMINDER: Vocabulary Test on Friday, October 11, 2013

Essay Assignment: Nursery Rhymes with a Twist
Start with a nursery rhyme, (KWO it)
Let your imagination run wild!
Who, What, When, Where, How  . . . . and, Why?
 . . . . . remember, you can ask yourself these Qs many more than once.

Elaborate and re-create  (KWO it) . . . . . Your essay should tell us a version of the nursery rhyme we never would have guessed. You may decide to tell it from a different perspective.

• Include one of each dress-up (properly indicated) in every paragraph. 1 paragraph minimum.
ww,  -ly,  b/c,  QA,  SV

• No banned words*
• No contractions
• Avoid dialogue as much as possible.
• Highlight vocabulary words

Each paragraph must have at least 10 sentences
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REMINDER: Vocabulary Test on Friday, October 11, 2013
Parents, I have included a copy of ALL the nursery rhymes for your reading pleasure!  
Each student has been given a different nursery rhyme.

The Itsy Bitsy Spider climbed up the waterspout.
Down came the rain, and washed the spider out.
Out came the sun, and dried up all the rain,
And the Itsy Bitsy Spider climbed up the spout again.


Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet,
Eating her curds and whey;
Along came a spider,
Who sat down beside her
And frightened Miss Muffet away
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Little Boy Blue, come blow your horn,
The sheep's in the meadow, the cow's in the corn;
Where is that boy who looks after the sheep?
Under the haystack fast asleep.


Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water.
Jack fell down and broke his crown,
And Jill came tumbling after.[


Oh where, oh where has my little dog gone?
Oh where, oh where can he be?
With his ears cut short, and his tail cut long,
Oh where, oh where can he be?


Ride a cock-horse to Banbury Cross,
To see a fine lady upon a white horse;
Rings on her fingers and bells on her toes,
And she shall have music wherever she goes.


Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.
All the king's horses and all the king's men
Couldn't put Humpty together again.


Hickory, dickory, dock,
The mouse ran up the clock.
The clock struck one,
And down he’d run,
Hickory, dickory, dock.


Little Bo-Peep has lost her sheep,
And doesn't know where to find them;
Leave them alone, And they'll come home,
Wagging their tails behind them.


Little Jack Horner sat in the corner,
Eating a Christmas pie;
He put in his thumb, and pulled out a plum,
And said, “What a good boy am I!”


Pease porridge hot, pease porridge cold,
Pease porridge in the pot, nine days old;
Some like it hot, some like it cold,
Some like it in the pot, nine days old.


Mary, Mary, quite contrary,
How does your garden grow?
With silver bells, and cockle shells,
And pretty maids all in a row.


Star light, star bright,
The first star I see tonight;
I wish I may, I wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight.


Old Mother Hubbard went to the cupboard,
To give the poor dog a bone;
When she came there, the cupboard was bare,
And so the poor dog had none.

BANNED WORDS
These words (and any form of these words) are banned:


eat/ate
come/came
give/gave
get/got
go/went
say/said
see/saw
big
pretty/nice
look
like