Reading maketh a full man . . . . . Speaking maketh a ready man . . . . . Writing maketh an exact man.

~~Sir Francis Bacon

Wednesday, February 24, 2021

Writers Mark SSJ Class Homework DUE: Wednesday, March 3, 2021

1) Be ready to recite the first FOUR line of Jabberwocky.


2) As Fast As Words Could Fly

Change the dialogue in As Fast As Words Could Fly to blue.

Change the wording to eliminate the dialogue in all but three cases. Keep those in blue.

Indicate ALL OPENERs in the story.

Indicate all DRESS UPs except QAs and SVs

Indicate the (D-SIM). If you added another, indicate that, also.

Highlight all sensory words in lime green.


3) Keep working on your portfolios!


As Fast As Words Could Fly



 As Fast As Words Could Fly

by

Pamela M. Tuck

 

 

Trouble was brewing in Greenville, North Carolina.

 

By five o’clock, fourteen-year-old Mason Steele was rushing to finish his schoolwork.  Pa would be home from his meeting soon, bringing a new problem.  New problems meant more work for Mason. He didn’t mind, though, because helping Pa’s civil rights group made Mason feel real important. The screen door banged shut.

 

“Where’s Mason?” Pa asked as he scanned the kitchen.

 

“Willis, the boy’s doing his lessons.” Ma sighed.

 

“I need him to write another letter for me. Ma-s-o-n-n-n!”

 

“Yes, sir,” Mason called.

 

He hurried into the room with paper and a pencil.

 

“Whittaker’s Restaurant refused to serve Matt Duncan’s boys,” Pa explained. “We got to form another sit-in.”

 

Mason took notes while Pa rambled on about what had happened. Only Mason could make sense out of what Pa said. Later, Mason turned his notes into a business letter.

 

“This sounds good enough to send to President Lyndon B. Johnson himself,”

 

Pa boasted after he read Mason’s letter. One evening, after the screen door banged shut, Mason waited for Pa to call him. Instead, he heard Ma and Pa talking quietly. When Mason finally entered the kitchen, he could hardly believe his eyes.

 

“A typewriter!” he gasped.

 

“Yep,” Pa said. “The group wanted to give it to you. Said you been quite a little lawyer for us. Figured a typewriter might help you someday.”

 

Mason slid his fingers over the keys. Each row looked like little steps climbing up.

 

“It’s beautiful,” Mason whispered. “I’ll type the civil rights group a thank-you letter.”

 

“That’ll be the right thing to do,” Ma agreed.

 

Soon school was out. During the summer, Mason and his two older brothers, Willis Jr. and Henry, picked tobacco with a few of the white boys who lived nearby.  Patrick and Daniel Jones were the only two who acted friendly. They often raced against Mason and his brothers to be the first to fill the mule cart. In the evenings, Mason was weary from the day’s work,

but that didn’t stop him from practicing his typing. Using his index fingers to pick out the keys, he learned where every letter and symbol was located on the typewriter. Summer flew by. 

 

Before he knew it, Mason started his first year of high school. After the third week, Pa called him and his brothers into the kitchen one evening.

 

“Boys, I got some real important news for you,” he began. “We just won a case we’ve been fighting for a long time. It ain’t right for y’all to be bused twelve miles to Bethel Union High School when Belvoir High ain’t but three miles away.”

 

The boys’ eyes widened. “P-P-Pa, you, you know them white folks ain’t gonna like us going to their school not one bit,” Willis Jr. stammered.

 

“Like it or not, y’all’s going,” Pa replied. “Somebody’s got to make a change.”

 

The boys stared at one another in disbelief.

 

“The bus’ll be here early Monday morning, so be ready,” Pa said as he got up from the table and left the room.

 

Monday morning, Mason and his brothers were nervous. They watched the school bus come roaring up the road. The driver slowed down just enough for the boys to see the white students on the bus laughing at them. Then he sped up, blowing dust in the boys’ faces.

 

“They just don’t want us on their bus,” Willis Jr. said. “I don’t want to ride their bus noways,” Mason added.

 

The boys trudged back to the house. When they told Pa the driver hadn’t stopped for them, he was furious. The next day, the same thing happened. The third day, the bus stopped. Slowly the boys climbed the steps.

 

“Move it! I ain’t got all day,” the driver yelled.“And get to the back!”

 

The boys stumbled over one another as they hustled down the aisle. Henry spotted a familiar face. “Hey, Patrick,” he said. Patrick didn’t answer. He just looked straight ahead.

 

“You Steele boys are asking for trouble,” Daniel whispered.

 

The driver took off. The sudden motion threw the boys into their seats. When the boys arrived at Belvoir High, the principal, Mr. Bullock, barricaded the doorway. He looked as if he had smelled a skunk.

 

“Report to class after the bell rings,” he snapped, and thrust their schedules toward them.

 

“How will we know where to go?” Willis Jr. asked.

 

“You found a way to get in here, so find your way around.” Mr. Bullock turned and stormed into the building.

 

By the time Mason located the right room, the class had already started.

  Cold stares and grimaces greeted him when he entered. Mason knew  which seat was his: the one in the back corner. Against the odds, Mason did well in school. He especially liked typing class. The teacher, Mrs. Roberts, ignored him, but he paid strict attention when she helped others.

 

At home, Mason practiced what he had learned. It wasn’t long before he needed to earn some money to buy typing paper and other supplies.

 

Mason found out that the Neighborhood Youth Corps sponsored an after-school program that offered jobs. He applied and received a position in the school library

 

“What can you do, boy?” Mrs. Turner, the librarian, asked.

 

“I can type, ma’am,” Mason answered.

 

“Well, come over here so I can show you what to do.” Mrs. Turner took a stack of index cards and sat down at a typewriter. “Pay attention, because I’m not going over this with you a second time.”

 

Mason had to transfer the information on the spines of books onto the cards. Mrs. Turner typed one card and left him without further instructions.

  Two hours later, Mrs. Turner approached Mason.

 

“How’s it coming, boy?” she demanded.

 

Mason handed her his stack of index cards.

 

Mrs. Turner’s eyes bulged. “My goodness! How many cards did you type?”

 

“I think about one hundred, ma’am,” Mason replied.

 

Mrs. Turner checked the cards. She couldn’t find a single mistake.

  “Gracious, boy,” she said. “You type faster than Mrs. Roberts.”

 

Mrs. Roberts was pleased to be relieved from the library work. She became friendlier to Mason in typing class. She even allowed him to use the new electric typewriter. The first time Mason used the electric typewriter, the letters jumped onto the paper with the slightest touch.

 

He had to get used to pressing a button to return to the left margin of his paper.

 

He could type faster and more quietly on the electric typewriter,

but he missed the tinkling bell on the manual typewriter that signaled a new line.Mason continued to improve his typing skills. Before long he could type forty words per minute. His job was going well too,and he was earning the money he needed for typing supplies.

 

Then Mason was fired without explanation.

 

“They done messed with the wrong fella,” Pa fumed when he found out what had happened. “I’m gonna call Golden Frinks on this one. He’s a field secretary for the SCLC.” Mason had heard plenty of Pa’s stories about the Southern Christian Leadership Conference, the organization that coordinated nonviolent action to end segregation. Pa had said that field secretaries interviewed people who complained about unequal treatment. Then they organized a march, a sit-in, or a protest.

 

“Golden Frinks was personally selected by Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.,” Pa added. “And believe me, son, Mr. Frinks shakes ground.”

 

The next morning, Golden Frinks, Pa, and other civil rights workers went to the Board of Education.

 

An investigation began.

 

The Board of Education discovered that Mrs. Turner’s husband didn’t want her to stay after school with a Negro boy. The federal government was funding the Youth Corps and now threatened to stop giving the school money for the program because Mason was treated unfairly. Mason was rehired.

 

One day in typing class, Mrs. Roberts announced that there was going to be a typing tournament among some of the high schools in the county.

  The fastest typist in the class would represent Belvoir High. The students fiercely competed against one another. Mr. Bullock reviewed the scores.

Then he announced the winner.

 

“Mason Steele will represent our school in the typing tournament.”

 

“How can a Negro represent our school?” a student blurted out.

 

“We can’t afford any more trouble with the Board of Education,” Mr. Bullock responded, stealing a glance at Mason.

 

Do I really want to do this? Mason thought. But then he recalled Pa’s words.Somebody’s got to make a change.

 

On the day of the tournament, Mr. Bullock and Mrs. Roberts drove Mason to Farmville High School. Upon entering the auditorium, Mason scanned the room. He tried to ignore the stares of the white students as he considered the selection of electric and manual typewriters. Mason knew if he chose a manual typewriter, he would lose time. He would have to take his left hand off the keys so he could hit the lever to start each new line.

 

All the other students sat down at electric typewriters. Mason had to make a decision. He closed his eyes to think. His typewriter at home flashed before him. Mason sat down at a manual typewriter. The judge went over the rules, then shouted, “Begin!”

 

Tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-DING.

 

Mason finished his first line. He couldn’t hear how fast the other students were typing. He focused only on his paper.

 

Tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-DING.

 

Tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-tap-DING.

 

Mason’s fingers flew over the keys. His typing echoed throughout the auditorium.

 

BZZZZZZZZ!

 

“Time’s up!” the judge yelled. All eyes were on Mason as the judge collected the papers. After a long wait, the results were announced.

 

“I can’t believe this. I really can’t believe this,” the judge said into the microphone.“Mason Steele, from Belvoir High, has broken all previous records with a typing speed of sixty-five words per minute.”

 

No one cheered.

Mason just stared straight ahead.

 

Mr. Bullock accepted the typing championship plaque for Belvoir High. Not a single person in the audience applauded. Mason received nothing.

 

 “That’s some skill you have, boy,” Mrs. Roberts complimented Mason on the drive back to school.

 

“Thank you, ma’am,” Mason responded.

 

“I just have one question,” Mr. Bullock said. “Why in the world did you choose a manual typewriter?”

 

Mason cleared his throat. “’Cause it reminds me of where I come from, sir.”

 

Neither of the adults said anything more to Mason the rest of the way. But Mason knew his words typed on paper had already spoken for him —

loud and clear..




As Fast As Words Could Fly read by Dulé Hill

Wednesday, February 17, 2021

Writers Mark SSJ Writing Class Homework DUE: Wednesday, February 24, 2021

1) Memorize the first two stanzas of Jabberwocky. Be ready to recite.

2) Write a three paragraph essay using Jabberwocky
as your prompt (as discussed in class).
There is a brainstorming list at the bottom of this to help you out.

NOVICE
Indicate one of each DRESS UP
Indicate 3 of the 7 OPENERs
Indicate 1 DEC
Indicate 1 M3
T/C
checklist

JV
Indicate one of each DRESS UP in each paragraph
Indicate 5 of the 7 OPENERs in each paragraph
Indicate 1 DEC in each paragraph
Indicate 1 M3  in each paragraph
T/C
checklist

VARSITY
Indicate one of each DRESS UP in each paragraph
Indicate one of each OPENER in each paragraph
Indicate 1 DEC  in each paragraph
Indicate 1 M3  in each paragraph
Indicate 1 OWL  in each paragraph
T/C
checklist

ALL
NO banned words
NO contractions
NO dialogue

Poetry Out Loud 2010




A wonderful musical rendition performed by elementary aged students.
Benedict Cumberbatch (AKA Dr. Strange, Sherlock, Hamlet). 
It just does not get any better than this!

The University of Utah Singers

  Hickory High School Rendition 
 

A Sottish Brogue Rendition


Jabberwocky Jam Bassoon and Piano  (John Falcone 2009)


Spencer Slaney (10th grade) Lockerby Composite School in Ontario, Canada 2011



Funny Version w/ Mime-like actions

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Jabberwocky  1871

by LEWIS CARROLL    (Rev. Charles Lutwidge Dodgson)      born: January 27, 1832 - died: January 14, 1898
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

"Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
The frumious Bandersnatch!"

He took his vorpal sword in hand:
Long time the manxome foe he sought--
So rested he by the Tumtum tree,
And stood awhile in thought.

And, as in uffish thought he stood,
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
Came whiffling through the tulgey wood,
And burbled as it came!

One two! One two! And through and through
The vorpal blade went snicker-snack!
He left it dead, and with its head
He went galumphing back.

"And hast thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy!
O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!"
He chortled in his joy.

'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
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BRAINSTORMING ideas for paragraph topics: 
feel free to use the extra info for padding your introduction and conclusion if it is congruous

• --> Bio on Lewis Carroll 

• --> written in 1871 - background info on the time period

• --> Jabberwocky was a part of Through the Looking Glass, and What Alice Found There (Alice in Wonderland) <-- research this to be clear

• --> Nonsense words (gibberish)
  <-- similar to Dr. Seuss  (examples?)

• --> Some words now in dictionary! <-- similar to Shakespeare  (get examples)

• --> *Specific words  . . . . . .

• --> History of nonsense stories 
  (look up)

• --> Analyze the literal v. the possible figurative meaning(s) of the story. What might it represent?

• --> Take a look at the many ways this has been interpreted in performance situations.

• --> Dive deeper into the weapon used. What does that tell us about the story, the character, the time period, etc. ?

• --> Compare to other stories that result in victory over a foe or threat.
(Possibly St. George and the Dragon, Abayoyo, David and Goliath, Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, Beowulf

• -->  Look at the alternate POV. What might the the story be from the Jabberwock's perspective?

 --> Why is this an appealing story & poem for both children and adults?  Analysis of Carroll's "Jabberwocky" 

• --> What is the Jabberwocky? What does it represent? What other beasts is it like?

• --> Which of the "Seven Basic Plots" is Jabberwocky?  
Why might it be compared to Beowulf or Lord of the Rings?  
https://interestingliterature.com/2016/01/22/a-short-analysis-of-jabberwocky-by-lewis-carroll/

• --> A discussion of the topic clincher that Lewis uses in the book. Is it effective. Why? or why not? What does it mean?

• --> How many nonsense words are in the book? Pick one or two and describe them in detail. What are the ways they are pronounced? (mome, manxome, gyre)
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Wednesday, February 10, 2021

SSJ Writers Mark Homework DUE: 2-17-21

1) Be ready to recite The Jabberwocky on 2-17-21 -- 1st stanza


’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
      Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
All mimsy were the borogoves,
      And the mome raths outgrabe.

2) Essay - Share your interpretation of The Jabberwocky.

                 For students who have done essays on The Jabberwocky before, choose a different angle, approach,  or perspective.

We will be writing a more in depth 5 paragraph essay inspired by The Jabberwocky. This week's essay is a warm up. The deeper you dig this week, the easier the next essay just might be.








LAGNIAPPE:
Here is a cool video I found that looks at the first line of Jabberwocky. This is so cool because this is a 5th grade class analyzing the first line of (mostly) nonsense poem. They are pretty smart! This class would give some homeschoolers a run for their money!  If you are a grammar geek guy or gal, you'll like this.
@13.30 the teacher explains the "cc rule" in "grammar-speak."
 

Wednesday, February 3, 2021

SSJ Writers Mark Homework DUE: 2-10-21

1) Count the lines of dialogue in the story.

2) Rewrite all sentences from the story that have a banned word. make the sentences better.

3) Write your own essay -- 3 paragraphs, as discussed in detail during class.
     NOVICE, JV, and VARSITY requirements are the same as last week.