Reading maketh a full man . . . . . Speaking maketh a ready man . . . . . Writing maketh an exact man.

~~Sir Francis Bacon

Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Due October 1 (Aesops Fable FI#6)

GENERAL REMINDERS:
Essays should be typed. Be sure to follow essay format requirements.
KWO, Checklist, and @ least 1 rough draft should be stapled to your essay.

• Essay: Re-write your Aesop's Fable. 
~~> Essays should be typed. 
~~> Follow the essay format requirements. Be sure that you are indicating required dress-ups (and openers) properly. 
~~> Staple your KWO, @ least 1 rough draft, and checklist to the back of your final copy essay. 
~~> No banned words (nor any conjugations, inflected forms, plurals,  comparatives, or superlatives of the banned words)

Banned Words: eat, see, come, big, nice, pretty, go, say, get  

~~> AGAIN . . . . REMEMBER to include your checklist! and your KWO and @ least 1 rough draft!  10 point deduction if the any of those are missing. ~~> KWOs, vocabulary words, Fix Its should be handwritten. 
~~> Write or type your name on everything.

Vocabulary words are bolded in the Fix Its. Write each word's definition, part of speech, and a sample sentence using it correctly. 
Fix Its need to be re-written, making corrections as needed. There are hints and requirements preceding each Fix It. Please note that the highlighted instructions pertain to Varsity Students only

1)  Re-written Aesop Fable
ly,  ww,  b/c,  asia,  SV,  QA

Opener #2 (prep)

Topic/Clincher should reflect, repeat, or reiterate
No banned words
Staple your KWO, Checklist, and @ least 1 draft to your final-copy essay
2)  Always be prepared to read your essay to the class.
3)  Frog Prince Fix Its #6
4)  Vocabulary


1)  Re-written Aesop Fable
ly,  ww,  b/c,  asia,  SV,  QA
Openers #2 (prep) and #3 (ly)

Topic/Clincher should reflect, repeat, or reiterate
No banned words
Staple your KWO, Checklist, and @ least 1 draft to your final-copy essay
2)  Always be prepared to read your essay to the class.
3)  Frog Prince Fix Its #6
4)  Vocabulary 


1)  Re-written Aesop Fable
ly,  ww,  b/c,  asia,  SV,  QA
Openers #2 (prep) and #3 (ly) and #4 (ing) and #6 (vss), 
Decs: (MET) and (SIM)

Topic/Clincher should reflect, repeat, or reiterate
No banned words
Staple your KWO, Checklist, and @ least 1 draft to your final-copy essay
2)  Always be prepared to read your essay to the class.
3)  Frog Prince Fix Its #6
4)  Vocabulary



Fix Its:
  • Be sure to use upper case for titles with names (Princess Dorinda), lower case for titles without names (princess).  
  • Sometimes #2 openers are disguised; the preposition is only implied.  
  • Explore cumulative and coordinate adjectives and the associated comma rule. See Comma Rule #1 on page A-10 of the Appendix.  
Week 6  
Shape 
  
She had only too pout that her plasma TV was minuscule, and queen Magnifica told the Palace Accountant too order her a projection TV, complete with multimedia accessory’s two.  
  
Although they agonized, and fretted Princess Dorindas companions saw no remedy.  
One crisp spring morning when the cherry blossoms were just beginning to appear Princess Dorinda was distracted by her latest plaything a golden ball.  
  
She tossed it up as she wandered between the exotic, botanical species in the regal conservatory. Where her father had found haven from his monarchial cares  
  
Eyeing with trepidation the glass windows surrounding them King Morton suggested why don’t you toss that ball out in the garden  
  
  
minuscule:  
 fretted:  
 monarchial:  
 trepidation:




Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Due September 24 (Answer Qs FI#5)

Remember:

• Essay: Answer the Question. You may use as many sources as you want. 
~~> Essays should be typed.
~~> Follow the essay format requirements.
~~> List your sources at the bottom of your essay.
~~> Staple your KWO and checklist to the back of your final copy essays.
~~> No banned words (nor any conjugations, inflected forms, plurals,  comparatives, or superlatives of the banned words)
Banned Words: eat, see, come, big, nice, pretty, go, say, get

Include the checklist! 10 point deduction if the checklist is missing. 

• KWOs, vocabulary words, Fix Its should be handwritten.

Sept 24th - Vocabulary Test on words from weeks 1-4
Know the part of speech, definition, & correct use of the word in a sentence.

• Write/type your name on everything. 


 

1)  KWO & CHECKLIST
2)  Essay:
Write one paragraph essay answering the question received in class.
Include SV, Q/A, B/C, W/W, -LY  

+ vocab for extra credit
3)  Fix It
4)  Vocabulary assignment and study for test


1) KWO & CHECKLIST
2)  Essay:
Write one paragraph essay answering the question received in class.
Include SV, Q/A, B/C, W/W, -LY and 

(2) [prepositional opener]  
+ vocab for extra credit
3)  Fix It
4)  Vocabulary assignment and study for test


1)  KWO & CHECKLIST
2)  Essay: 
Write one paragraph essay answering the question received in class.
Include SV, Q/A, B/C, W/W, -LY, AISA, T/C, 

(2) [prepositional opener], 
(3) [-ly opener], and 
(6) [VSS],   
+ vocab for extra credit
3)   Fix It
4)  Vocabulary assignment and study for test



Fix Its: 

  • Introduce the #3 “-ly” adverb opener. Now that students know this opener, the “-ly” adverb dress-up should be underlined only if it is in the sentence, not the first word.  
  • Have you ever heard the term antecedent? It means “to come before.” When you use pronouns (he, she, it), it needs to be clear what noun you are referring to that came before. If it is not clear, you had better not use the pronoun. Watch for that this week! It is an advanced concept.  
  • Watch for compound sentences where two main clauses are connected with a coordinating conjunction. A comma is needed. See Comma Rule #9 on page A-11 in the Appendix: MC, cc MC.  
Week 5  
Shape 
  
Years of indulgence had spoiled her beyond recognition however she recalled a time in her childhood when her charge had seemed a lovable tractable and contented child.  
  
She use to bring pictures she had drawn two Lady Constance and she had cuddled in her lap in the evenings. Sadly, when Dorindas mother was alive no expense had been spared too gratify the princess’s.  
  
No extravagance was to grate: Disneys Princess Castle Ground became thier playground, they each owned a personal set of the European Girl dolls and thier friends, with thier complete wardrobes, and ubiquitous furniture and accessories.  
  
Shaking her head in dismay Lady Constance one day clucked to Lady Inwaiting its no wonder that child has turned out so blemished. [quotation continues]  
  
tractable:  
gratify:  
ubiquitous:  
blemished:

Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Due September 17, 2014 (FI#4)

GENERAL REMINDERS:
Essays should be typed. Be sure to follow essay format requirements 
KWOs, vocabulary words, Fix Its should be handwritten.


 

1)  Use a KWO you have already created and write a one paragraph essay. 
Remember to "talk through" your KWO. Tell the story to your Mom or Dad and then write it down. You will probably have more than one rough draft.

Staple your KWO to your final essay.

2)  Your final ESSAY must include the following dress-ups:
     ly

     ww
     b/c
     SV
     QA
Properly indicate your dress-ups.
3)  Fix It #4
4)  Vocabulary words - week #4



1) 2 KWOs and 2 ESSAYS  

     a) Use a KWO you have already created and write a one paragraph essay.
     b) Write a KWO and a one paragraph ESSAY using the Narwhal information handed out in class.
Staple your KWOs to your final essays.
2)  Your final ESSAYS must include these dress-ups:
     ly

     ww
     b/c
     SV
     QA
3)  Fix It #4
4)  Vocabulary words - week #4


1)  2 KWOs and 2 ESSAYS  

     a) Use a KWO you have already created and write a one paragraph essay.
     b) Write a KWO and a one paragraph ESSAY using the Narwhal information handed out in class.
Staple your KWOs & checklists to your final essays.
 
2)  Your final ESSAYS must include the following dress-ups:
     ly

     ww
     b/c
     asia
     SV
     QA
     T/C
3)   Fix It #4
4)  Vocabulary words - week #4



Fix Its: 
  • Cumulative adjectives will show up this week, and they don’t need commas. See Comma Rule #1 in the Appendix on page A-10.  
  • Interestingly, some adjectives need hyphens (-) between them. These are called compound adjectives. Two examples are “ten-story building” andnine-year-old girl.See if you can find one this week!  
Week 4Shape 
 Older now, Princess Dorinda had earned a name for beauty reaching into the furthest kingdoms. With the latest fada beauty spotperched high on her cheek, and her hair twisted into a powdered pompadour Princess Dorinda fancied herself quiet chic.  
  
Alas her beauty was flawed by her reputation for finickiness, and, dare I mention it, self-centeredness. Time and again king Morton had urged her to consider 1 or another young suitor, time and again she had refused all the eligible, young men.  
  
None are wealthy enough, or titled enough to suite her all too high Highness. During these reflections, King Morton shakes his head in abject despair dislodging his jewel encrusted crown.  
  
He wasn’t the only 1 clucking his tongue in consternation over princess Dorinda, lady Constance her elder companion since childhood had virtually given up on training her young charge in true, courtly behavior.  
  
  
pompadour:   
finickiness:  
 abject:  
 consternation: