Reading maketh a full man . . . . . Speaking maketh a ready man . . . . . Writing maketh an exact man.

~~Sir Francis Bacon

Saturday, October 26, 2013

Due Friday, November 1, 2013 (FI#9 & Letter)

We will meet @ 10:00 on my class conference line. Dial in at 10:00am. Do NOT
go to St. Simon & Jude this Friday. 
No SS&J ~~~>

Essay Assignment:
Write a letter to a loved one, preferably to someone you care about greatly.
Choose someone who would especially appreciate a letter from you.
Suggestions in my classes include:
1) "My brother in Afghanistan"
2) "My Godparent in Ohio"
3) "My Grandmother"

• KWO first! Jot down reminders of what you want to share.
• Include RD and Checklist and KWO with finished essay/letter (PLEASE STAPLE THESE TOGETHER)
• Minimum 2 paragraphs
Include at least one of each dress-up and each opener (#2, #3, and #6)  in each paragraph. Start a new paragraph when you switch topics. Make sure each paragraph has at least 6 to 7 sentences minimum.

I will let you decide if you want to mail these letters after the essays (letters) are graded. I really hope you will save a copy without the bolding, underlining, etc., so that you can mail to your loved one. Better yet, hand-write the one you are actually going to send.

Here is an example of what KWOs could include:

Weather
    Sweaters here Sunday
     Rain on Mon
     Roses happy 7Bloomed!
     Dogs loving it
     Fido outside lots
TY 4 sweater (still use!)
       liked zigzag embroidery
       People compliment
       Never want 2 outgrow
Funny thing class
     Teacher crazy!
      Acted like train
      Little Engine book
      Writing getting better
       A's on papers
       Share w/ U soon
Sister's school picture
       Silly smile
       Blinked eyes
       Teacher laughed
       Re-taking next week
Football game w/ neighbors
       Parents against kids
       P' better than expected!
       I caught pass
       Sister made touchdown
        ids won
Thanksgiving plans
         Can U come?
          Miss you
          @ least Skype
Homily @ Mass good 1!
         Priest told joke
         Gospel from Luke
         I understood & liked
         Had 2 explain 2 brother
         Included fav Bible verse
         Reading next Sun.'s B4 Mass
         Easier to follow
Learning to kayak
         Fell in twice
         Water not deep
         Dad took picture
         Will post on FB
         Practiced again yesterday
         River pretty & clam
         Heron, Fish, Dragonflies

Monday, October 21, 2013

Due Friday, October 25, 2013 (FI#8 & Ind Qs)

Answer the question you chose or obtained by a trade . . . . .

Homework:

1) Essay Details:
One paragraph minimum

Include all Dress-ups, and Openers #2, #3, and #6 in EACH paragraph

Be sure to "indicate" properly

Vocabulary words - properly used and indicated = extra credit

Alliteration (3 in a row) - properly used and indicated = extra credit

Include your KWO & a rough draft & checklist

No banned words or contractions

Do not use dialogue (or, use at your own risk)

2) Fix It #8

3) Vocabulary Words 



Saturday, October 12, 2013

Due Friday, October 18, 2013 (FI#7 & Add 3 Openers)



1) Essay Assignment:
• Add 3 openers to your Nursery Rhyme Essay . . . .
a #2, #3, and #6 
• Make any changes that we talked about in class . . . no banned words, indicate only what is required, add vocab if you want to.
• Remember to INDICATE
PROPERLY
• Remember that all required DRESS-UPs and these three OPENERS should be in each paragraph 
#2 -- Prepositional opener (AKA: prep opener)
#3 -- ly opener (AKA: adverbial opener)
#6 -- vss 
2) NO KWO for this assignment 
3) NO Rough Draft for this assignment
4) YES  CHECKLIST -- Please include a checklist
5) YES Fix It #7
6) YES Vocabulary Words