Reading maketh a full man . . . . . Speaking maketh a ready man . . . . . Writing maketh an exact man.

~~Sir Francis Bacon

Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Due October 29 (EssayContest & FI #10)

ESSAY CONTEST  http://hslda.org/Contests/Essay/2014/2014rules.asp
You should use our regular indications in the essay that you submit to me.

The essay that you submit to the contest should NOT have any bolding, underlining, or highlighting.


Please check out the website for all details. This contest is for students ages 7–19. You will write a short essay (700 words max) based on the theme prompts at the website, corresponding to your age category. Each student may submit two (2) different essays. Your entry must be postmarked no later than November 1, 2014.

Prizes

Cash congratulations, plus a wonderful transcript booster!

Age Category 1 2 3
First $100 $150 $200
Second $75 $100 $150
Third $50 $50 $100
Honorable Mentions (2) $25 $25 $50

Themes

Our world has been shaped by the inventions of the past; with inventors improving and building on those of previous generations. Every item we use—from the toothbrush to the smartphone—was invented by someone using his or her God-given creativity and intellect to do something! Our themes for this year’s contest focus on inventing or inventions.
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Reminders about upcoming assignments:
November 5: 
Portfolios

November 12: 
Make sure have read The Magician's Nephew


GENERAL REMINDERS:
• Essays should be typed. Be sure to follow all essay format requirements 
• KWOs, vocabulary words, Fix Its should be handwritten.
• Staple your KWO, your checklist, & @ least 1 RD to your final copy essay. 


1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (vss)

3)  Fix It #9
4)  Vocabulary assignment
no banned words & no contractions




1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (5), (vss)

3)  No DEC requirements:
4)  Fix It & Vocab #9

no banned words & no contractions


 
1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (4), (5), (vss)

3)  No DEC requirements:
4)  Fix It & Vocab #9

no banned words & no contractions 




Fix Its: 

Review comma rules after certain openers. See Comma Rules 3-6 in the Appendix page A-10. Also discuss that commas are needed after long introductory elements.  
Week 10  
Shape 
You didnt tell me it was solid gold he wheezed. Princess Dorinda didnt hear him, she had all ready skipped back to the palace, tickled with the return of her treasure.  
  
That evening while the royal family dined sumptuously they heard a faint tapping at the castle door, moments later, the footman appeared, with a message for Princess  
Dorinda.  
  
“Princess” he began. You have a visitor at the door excusing herself from the table Dorinda hastened away. When she opened the door however blood drained from her  
face, their squatted the forbearing frog.  
  
“You forgot you’re pledge to treat me hospitably at the palace” he croaked she slammed the door in his face. Dorinda who was at the door, King Morton inquired when she returned to the table.  
  
  
wheezed:  
 sumptuously:  
 forbearing: 
hospitably:

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Due October 22 (NR & FI #9)

October 22: 
Retold Nursery Rhyme & Vocab Test Weeks 1-8 (see bottom of this post)

October 29: 
ESSAY CONTEST  http://hslda.org/Contests/Essay/2014/2014rules.asp

November 5: 
Portfolios

November 12: 
Make sure have read The Magician's Nephew

GENERAL REMINDERS:
• Essays should be typed. Be sure to follow all essay format requirements 
• KWOs, vocabulary words, Fix Its should be handwritten.
• Staple your KWO, your checklist, & @ least 1 RD to your final copy essay.


 

1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (vss)

3)  Fix It #9
4)  Vocabulary assignment
no banned words & no contractions





1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (5), (vss)

3)  DEC requirements:
(ALLIT), (Q?), (SIM)
4)  Fix It & Vocab #9

no banned words & no contractions 

 


1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (4), (5), (vss)

3)  DEC requirements:
(ALLIT), ("Q"), (Q?), (SIM)
4)  Fix It & Vocab #9

no banned words & no contractions



Fix Its:
Note how em dashes (—) can be used to create a break in thought.  
  • Use commas to set off interrupters. See the Comma Rule #11 Appendix page A-11. Interrupters, such as “you know,” are nonessential.  
  • Use a colon after a main clause to introduce a list.  
  • Students no longer need to mark #1 subject sentence openers.  
Week 9  
Shape 
“Oh yes benevolent frog!” (Notice that in fairy tales, character’s don’t have great curiosity about such oddities as talking frogs—or, maybe Dorinda was to self-centered to think about any one other than her.  
  
“I’ll gladly do so, with one stipulation the frog responded. “Anything! My dad’ll kill me if I loose that ball, which cost him a Royal Fortune. Its gold you know.  
  
“Well I didn’t know anything of the sort but I do think I could dexterously retrieve it. Here are my terms I’ll bring you the ball if you’ll treat me at your table in the castle let me dine from your very own plate and allow me to dwell one night in the palace”.  
  
Sure thing Dorinda responds hastily perhaps a little to curtly. With that, the frog hops back into the water disappears four a few moments then returns, panting as only frogs can pant with the ball.  
  
benevolent:  
 stipulation:  
 dexterously:  
 curtly:

REMINDERS FROM THE BOARD: 
Here are @ least 8 ways to support the ideas in your essay (or facts in your report).
  1. Examples
  2. Personal Experiences
  3. Statistics, Numbers, Percentages
  4. Research, Testimonies, Quotes 
  5. Observation
  6. Description
  7. Anecdotes
  8. Analogies

VARSITY & JV, memorize all 8 -- this WILL be on the vocabulary test.
1st Year Students  memorize @ least 3 ways to support ideas in your essays
.

Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Due October 15 (Letter & FI #8)

Essay Assignment:
Write a letter to a loved one, preferably to someone you care about greatly.
Choose someone who would especially appreciate a letter from you.
Suggestions in class included:
1) Brother or sister in college
2) Grandparent
3) Aunt fighting cancer

4) Pen-pal
5) Retired Priest or Nun

6) A sponser child
7) A shut-in, Meals-on-Wheels


If you need someone to write to, I personally know: a jet fighter named Clancy who is overseas & could always use a letter from home. I also know a cloistered nun who would love to hear from a young person. I also know certain young man (14) who is discerning the priesthood and is at school 1000 miles away from home.
 
WHERE TO START:
• Brainstorm subjects you might want to write about.                            

• Create your KWO next! Jot down reminders of what you want to share. See the list of ideas at the end of this post.
• Staple RD, Checklist and KWO to finished letter
• Minimum 3 paragraphs.   

Note: 
1st Year: @ least 4 sentences per paragraph. 
JV & V:  @ least 5 sentences per paragraph.

 
THIS ASSIGNMENT ONLY!                                             
Include at least one of each dress-up and each opener and each DEC in your whole letter. I AM NOT REQUIRING 1 per paragraph as usual. Soooooooo, start a new paragraph when you switch topics. Make sure each paragraph has at least 5 to 6 sentences minimum (JV & V).          
4 sentences minimum for 1st Years. 
No T/C required.
 


REPEAT: INDICATE ONLY ONE OF EACH DRESS UP AND REQUIRED OPENERS & DECs IN THE WHOLE LETTER.
Keep a copy without the bolding, underlining, etc., so that you can mail to your loved one. 


Examples of the kinds of subjects that your KWOs could include:

Weather
    Sweaters here Sunday
     Rain on Mon
     Roses happy 7Bloomed!
     Dogs loving it
     Fido outside lots
TY 4 sweater (still use!)
       liked zigzag embroidery
       People compliment
       Never want 2 outgrow
I like class
      Kisses 4 Kate bk.
      Writing getting better
       A's on papers
        Read w/ microphone
       Share w/ U soon
Sister's school picture
       Silly smile
       Blinked eyes
       Teacher laughed
       Re-taking next week
Football game w/ neighbors
       Parents against kids
       P' better than expected!
       I caught pass
       Sister made touchdown
       kids won
Thanksgiving plans
         Can U come?
          Miss you
          @ least Skype
Homily @ Mass good 1!
         Priest told joke
         Gospel from Matthew
         I understood & liked b/c
         Had 2 explain 2 brother
         Included fav Bible verse
         Reading next Sun.'s B4 Mass
         Easier to follow
Learning to kayak
         Fell in twice
         Water not deep
         Dad took picture
         Will post on FB
         Practiced again yesterday
         River pretty & clam
         Heron, Fish, Dragonflies


 

1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (vss)

3)  Fix It #8
4)  Vocabulary assignment


1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (5), (vss)

3)  DEC requirements:
(ALLIT), (Q?), (SIM)
4)  Fix It & Vocab #8


1)  DRESS UP requirements:  
ly, ww, bc, asia, QA, SV
2)  OPENER requirements:
(2), (3), (4), (5), (vss)

3)  DEC requirements:
(ALLIT), ("Q"), (Q?), (SIM)
4)  Fix It & Vocab #8





Fix Its: 
Remember that periods and commas go inside the closing quotation marks.  
  • Correctly use like or as. Like is a preposition and should be followed by an object to create a prepositional phrase (she sings like a bird). As is a conjunction and should be followed by a clause with a subject and a verb (she sings as a bird does).  
  • A predicate nominative is the noun following a linking verb such as “is.” Example: She is the queen. Queen is the predicate nominative.  Use I instead of me if it is a predicate nominative. Do not say, “It is me.” Instead say, “It is I.”  
Week 8  
Shape 
If you would permit me madam I should be honored to rescue your plaything”, a throaty voice offered. And Dorindas tears dried instantly as she looked around for the person belonging to the voice.  
  
A little flustered when sighting no one, she inquired “pray tell, who has tendered such a thoughtful offer Groomed in courtly speech Dorinda could talk as a princess when convenient.  
  
When a slimy putrid green amphibian hopped toward her on the rim of the well, croaking, “It was me Dorinda let lose a spine tingling shriek and nearly ran away, her inquisitiveness got the better of her however.  
  
“How is it you can talk Mr Frog” “Its a dull story but maybe I’ll tell it to you one day, for the present, would you like me to salvage your ball?”  

  
throaty: 
 tendered: 
 inquisitiveness: 
salvage: